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Nice graphics, good animation, interesting story. The only problem, really, is the sound. Balancing the levels throughout the project would have made it even better. Some of the characters spoke louder than others, some had better actors than the others. The main 9 ball clock kept making his Ps pop. Fix the sound, and you're set.

RadioTubeClock responds:

I plan on working with another clock on balancing the levels better in the future, hopefully that will help. Thanks for the review.

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His moustache was fine.

Sounds effects would add audio clutter. Perhaps more emphasis on the beat of the song should be placed.

Something like the screen shaking with the bass or the background pulsating to the beat would add to the effect. His mouth didn't do the song justice.

Surn responds:

Interesting... I know Weebl got away with screen pulsing with "Narwhals" but I think it would be risky. It would be nice if I could make my animations move to the beat more.

Nice

American football? Lol, more like "Every other country in the world Football". Other than it not representing the sport (if that was the point, then I missed it), two things you coulda improved are the soundtrack and the lack of start button once the animation loaded.

KeiKuzco responds:

American Football is another animation by a guy named Someone

Yep

That needed to be said. Good job!

Camron23 responds:

Ah... so true...
Thanks!

Well...

for a first animation, it was good. I can't animate anything, so I don't know how you;ll take this, but I think you need to work on the general lip-syncing and fluidity of motion. The coloring was fine, as far as I could tell, it was the movement that detracted from the animation. Lol, and the characters were funny-looking (eye reflections on the female, female appearance of the male). Remove any gender ambiguity that may be present in your work, and you're golden lol.

LuckyLast responds:

Yeah Lip syncing and movement (Kills me >.>)
The characters were from the Anime D.gray-man and they were both technically boys so... xP
Thanks for the review!

Dude....

ugh. Gave me a headache in the first couple of seconds. The background is pulsing and buzzing. Why? Why did you make this? It's not humorous.

Shipp responds:

I MADE IT BECAUSE THIS IS HOW I FEEEEEL

Niiiiice

Man, that was awesome! Heh, you just might have convinced me to try out Phoenix Wright and/or (?) Apollo Justice (the games). Heh, they are probably nothing like this, but hey... yea. Nice movie!

MarcusRaven responds:

Glad to have helped. They really are great games. Enjoy! And thanks!

-MR

lol!!

That kid!! AHahaha!!! lol. What happened to the part where he's angry in the sweatshirt and stuff?? This is freaking awesome!

bobthevamp responds:

this is the original holograms themesong, so its shorter as it was made for an 80's TV show.

I watch it often...

Finally, someone makes a cool flash with nice music, animation, and well, good stuff :P. Uh, also, I think it matters very little, but the third song when they say "There is nothing I won't do," I think.. that is a male singer (I downloaded the song).

Keveta2 responds:

LoL.. well i couldn't tell :P... If it's a guy..then he sounds gay ^^

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