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[(16-bit) Russio]

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His moustache was fine.

Sounds effects would add audio clutter. Perhaps more emphasis on the beat of the song should be placed.

Something like the screen shaking with the bass or the background pulsating to the beat would add to the effect. His mouth didn't do the song justice.

Surn responds:

Interesting... I know Weebl got away with screen pulsing with "Narwhals" but I think it would be risky. It would be nice if I could make my animations move to the beat more.

[TF: Revenge of the Lolin']

Not funny

It's not funny. The animation is really sub-par, and it's clear that you're attempting to make something akin to Egoraptor's stuff. Go Go Parody Rangers was good, but this is not. Improve, and stop milking your "fame" on NG as an excuse to make boring flashes.

[Stop asking me that!!!]

Yep

That needed to be said. Good job!

Camron23 responds:

Ah... so true...
Thanks!

[Brawl Funnies [Dick 1]]

Nice point.

At least you guys recognize Brawl Taunts for the over-blown thing that it is.

[Twilight: The Broodening]

What?

No one else seems to notice this...

This isn't flash. Why is it on a flash website? If I wanted to watch boring slideshows, with low-res images, and lame voice acting, I'd go on YouTube.

[Awesome Racer]

Great

but, I agree with Celtic-Tiger about the style thing. It was as if I was watching something made by Egoraptor but with his personal sense of humor missing. If you had come up with your own style to do this flash in, it would have probably been a lot more "successful" (better).

[Anything you Can Do [DGM]]

Well...

for a first animation, it was good. I can't animate anything, so I don't know how you;ll take this, but I think you need to work on the general lip-syncing and fluidity of motion. The coloring was fine, as far as I could tell, it was the movement that detracted from the animation. Lol, and the characters were funny-looking (eye reflections on the female, female appearance of the male). Remove any gender ambiguity that may be present in your work, and you're golden lol.

LuckyLast responds:

Yeah Lip syncing and movement (Kills me >.>)
The characters were from the Anime D.gray-man and they were both technically boys so... xP
Thanks for the review!

[Chronicles of Awesome]

Terrible

Why would you attempt to emulate EgoRaptor? It's pathetic. Leave the "Awesome" to the pros...